I have been given complete freedom with this poster, so I decided to use my own photo. I like the layout, but I can't help but feel that something is missing, maybe needs a little colour. The first poster is the original one, the second with red circles (which seem a little too overbearing) and the final contains subtle blue lines which is my personal favorite.
I haven't kerned the letters yet, but was wondering if there was anything major that I should change that you guys can spot?
[EDIT] Got the date wrong, my bad, it's actually on the 24th.